You write a song about someone and need more inspiration with the lyrics.
These aspects will give your lyrics more depth and bring it closer to your audience.
1. Self-referred and Visible
– details of your protagonist
(“Feel the sweat break on my brow” – Iron Maiden)
– his outfit – what does he wear?
(“…of white skin on red leather” – Deftones)
– how does he move?
– his look – does he have a beard, glasses etc.?
2. Self-referred and Invisible
– other senses – what does he hear or smell?
– is he suffering from pain?
– what are the protagonist’s future plans?
(“Following our will and wind we may just go where no one’s been” – Tool)
– in what mood is he? angry? sad?
3. Environmental and Visible
– location – where does the story take place?
– what events happen? a disaster?
(“Infernal machines arise, flesh and steel collide” – Symphony X)
– what’s the weather like?
– what time of day is it? morning? evening?
(“In the cold light of morning, while everyone’s yawning” – Placebo)
4. Environmental and Invisible
– what year is it? at some point in the future?
– what time is it?
(“11 a.m., by now you would think that I would be up” – Incubus)
– what is the temperature in the room / outside?
– does the political situation play a role in the story?
(“A black flag and a red star, a rising sun loomin’ over Los Angeles” – Rage against the Machine)
You don’t have to use ALL of these aspects in your song, of course. But the more you use, the more images you give the audience. And the closer you get to them.